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Businesscard 07 by ~seraphslanding:iconseraphslanding:


©2007-2008 ~seraphslanding
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Submitted: July 7, 2007
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Prepping for Otakon :) Criticism welcome

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=HayliLiz:iconHayliLiz: Jul 7, 2007, 3:10:35 PM
I think that's really pretty. *o*

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~familiarity:iconfamiliarity: Jul 7, 2007, 6:51:10 PM
I'm not sure if I like the flower print cutout around the girl. I think it's better if you leave her as a whole and then fade to the bottom, or let her be cut out by the bottom.

Otherwise, very pretty!
~familiarity:iconfamiliarity: Jul 7, 2007, 6:52:53 PM
Oh, and no flower for the dot in the I. I think it'll look fine without anything but the letter that's level with the other three.

Sorry... I have coordination and design issues. I wish I could draw like you!
~dolce-verde:icondolce-verde: Jul 7, 2007, 7:11:55 PM
I think that shit looks tight, girl.

i can see that you're trying to really start your art career, best of luck!


(pssst, throw in a good word for me! - el oh el, jay kay)

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~seraphslanding:iconseraphslanding: Jul 7, 2007, 7:23:51 PM
Oh, I fail hard at composition and design. :D I'll change some things, most certainly.
~familiarity:iconfamiliarity: Jul 7, 2007, 10:11:47 PM
If you like, which you're not entitled to accepting, I can help you out with the card. It's really pretty already, just needs to be simple and appealing to the masses. Might also save you some money. Maybe...